take me to your heart，哪位重新翻譯一下

濤行九天

俺的古詩版來了！

hiding from the rain and snow
藏身風雪外；
trying to forget but i won't let go
相忘仍掛懷；
looking at a crowded street
滿街來往者；
listening to my own heart beat
唯我心復燃；
so many people all around the world
茫茫浮塵世；
tell me where do i find someone like you girl
何處覓芳顏？

take me to your heart take me to your soul
抓住你的心；
give me your hand before i'm old
牽手相依偎；
show me what love is haven't got a clue
問愛為何物；
show me that wonders can be true
奇跡永留存；
they say nothing lasts forever
愛不在長久；
we're only here today
只要曾擁有；
love is now or never
愛就在當下；
bring me far away
相伴天涯走。

take me to your heart take me to your soul
抓住你的魂；
give me your hand and hold me
相擁走余生；
show me what love is be my guiding star
愛情星一顆；
it's easy take me to your heart
帶我墜愛河。

standing on a mountain high
斯人山巔立；
looking at the moon through a clear blue sky
明月高空懸；
i should go and see some friends
迷途問故友；
but they don't really comprehend
何人解我心？
don't need too much talking without saying anything
無須空恬臊；
all i need is someone who makes me wanna sing
盡管開心顏！

濤行九天

推敲了幾個字，還是挺有意思

老郭

哇塞！九天中文功底可以！

再看看這個古體如何：

避此身于風雪兮，
欲相忘而掛懷；
觀往復之人流兮，
聽吾心之怦然。

英語太低級了。比大觀園里的劉姥姥還土。翻譯這首歌，就像伺候劉姥姥作詩，沒意思。

sz_kd

都是 高手啊

McuPlayer

九天兄好文采

naos

不要試圖用母語去理解其他民族的語言。語言的玄妙支出在于意境！

宇宙飛船

hiding from the rain and snow 藏身于雨雪之中  //俺還是認同這個意思。

一朝成名

濤哥這筆應該加褲子了，很有詩意

濤行九天

最后這幾句我自己都感覺意境不錯。

斯人山巔立；
明月高空懸；
迷途問故友；
何人解我心？
無須空恬臊；
盡管開心顏！

ZigBee筆記

好詩，好詩！

龍龍

濤哥文采也太好了啊，好的不象“電工”啊！！
突然發現濤哥是個貧農啊，就憑這詩，怎么也是一秀才��！

步從容

回復4樓老郭：
我來試試：
hiding from the rain and snow 避開風，避開雪
trying to forget but i won't let go 試圖忘記，無法釋懷
looking at a crowded street 望著擁擠的街道
listening to my own heart beat 傾聽自己的心跳
so many people all around the world 滾滾紅塵中
tell me where do i find someone like you girl 何處尋覓你的芳蹤

take me to your heart take me to your soul 帶我進駐，你的心靈
give me your hand before i'm old 讓我牽著你的手，在我老去之前
show me what love is haven't got a clue 告訴我什么是愛，如此難解
show me that wonders can be true 告訴我奇跡真會出現
they say nothing lasts forever 人說世上沒有天長地久
we're only here today 今日就是我們的所有
love is now or never 愛就是現在，或永遠沒有
bring me far away 請帶我遠走

take me to your heart take me to your soul 帶我進駐，你的心靈
give me your hand and hold me 伸出你的手，把我擁住
show me what love is be my guiding star 告訴我什么是愛，作我的北斗
it's easy take me to your heart 須臾間帶我進駐你的心

standing on a mountain high 站在高山之上
looking at the moon through a clear blue sky 仰望高掛晴空的月亮
i should go and see some friends 欲待尋訪幾位友朋
but they don't really comprehend 又怕他們其實不懂
don't need too much talking without saying anything 何須整日言不及義
all i need is someone who makes me wanna sing 只求伊人，令我放聲吟歌

老郭

回復32樓步從容：

好。更有韻味

se020.com

翻譯軟件一下

hbsxjh

好詞
好歌